हामी बिचको मेरो प्रेम

म, उनी र हामी बीचको मेरो प्रेम,
कुनै गुलाफ जस्तो सुगन्धित थिएन,
न त कुनै पिडा थियो, न नै कुनै प्यास,
कुनै सजिव सुन्दरता थिएन,
कुनै चल अचल आत्माहरुको दर्पण पनि थिएन,
त्यो त् केवल अर्थहीन सपनाहरुको स्पर्श थियो,
बिस्थापित कामनाहरुको स्थापित आधार थियो,
त्यहि आधारले उनी मेरो थिइन्,
तर म उनको हुने आधार थिएन ||

म, उनी र हामी बिचको मेरो प्रेम,
कुनै चल्ला जस्तो कोरलेर निस्केको थिएन,
न नै थियो समन्वय प्रगतिशील मुटुहरुको,
न नै आँखाहरुको साथ थियो,
कुनै शब्दहरुको खेल पनि थिएन,
र हुन पनि पाएन,
त्यो त सायद कुनै टुहुरो एक्लो थियो,
कुनै अस्तित्वहिन जस्तै हुर्कीरह्यो,
बढ्दै गयो, झाँगिदै गयो,
तर धरातल भेटेन टेक्ने,
गुमनाम गुपचुप आयो, गयो अनि सक्कीयो |||

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9 thoughts on “हामी बिचको मेरो प्रेम

    1. and round and round…
      most dangerous one,
      this poem seems like a boy lamenting about his crush .. 😀 है ?

      hey good morning ! 😀
      have a nice day ahead !

      1. hmm…

        firstly त it looked only love stuffs
        this and that
        happens in love

        अन्त्यमा चैँ it looked so!
        like u said.

        a very good mornin to you : )

        have a smiling day.

        : )

      2. actually it isn’t a ‘love stuffs’ poem, it’s just an interpretation of what the person thought love is.
        one of my friend says in this poem there is just depression and the poem is sad,

        ha ha but I enjoy writing these stuffs . They’re easy to imagine.

        Have a good day ahead 🙂

      3. smiling

        indeed!
        that’s wat I actually meant.
        interpretation of love.

        But last last tira.
        it looked like
        a depressed boy! ani tired of love!
        etc etc.

        haha

        but u kno!
        these kinds of feelings r very strong.
        very heart-felt.

      4. Yeah I know,
        😀
        not really, he he 🙂
        But the whole thing is that there are times when you have these feelings, whether it is love or not.

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